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Sue Cauhape's avatar

I loved the little play with words in your haiku.

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Ivy-Rose Opal's avatar

Thank you! I wasn't sure if it would pass people by or not, so I'm thrilled you picked up on that.

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Dan Ackerfeld's avatar

The river rushes

A perfect place to motor

For ursus aqua

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Ivy-Rose Opal's avatar

This is a fun poem, thank you for sharing

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Brian Funke's avatar

Very fun haiku!

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Ivy-Rose Opal's avatar

Thank you!

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Ivy-Rose Opal's avatar

Thank you!

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